oh so punk!trash Elvis boy with that hard rock hair and those {-razorblade} eyes
fucking junkie fantasy; coin-operated boy with a .skeleton. smile
he’s deader inside than her flawless eyes going blind beneath the dirty glamour disco lights
he’s the fucking [alkaline] running through her veins and spilling down. her. plastic. thighs.
the kind of dangerous angel that has the knees of every .f.i.l.t.h.y. dance floor slut kissing the parquet tiles tonight
the […skeleton] ladies and [jealous…] gentleman have all come for the show
to see him deliver his lines with her tongue the whole way down his throat
and grin like a d eca yin g corpse
sprawled across the glitter-and-mildew of the bathroom floor
when she’s standing in the next stall throwing up her guts
[&&s-e-w-i-n-g herself up;]
he wants all the pretty boys too drunk to talk
and the .;princess:. girls too high to give a fffuck
&& every anorexic. mannequin. marionette on the dance floor getting ~ drunk;;
all of them know he’s the only [[life]] left in this hollow ---screamscene,
candy coated [bone-white] cheeks with [red cherry] lips, all cigarette smoke and morphine
baby’s barely breathing, spitting cancerous nicotine
+the [not-so] innocent truth is nothing matters tonight
but the bitter taste of spit and alcohol s.p.i.l.l.i.n.g; from your lips like lies
all the {-perfect-} girls have carved his name in the bathroom mirror’s dangerous shine
with a filthy razorblade; while they’re doing thin white --lines-----;
tonight it’s [heartbreak] on x.sunset strip::.
while she’s throwing it away for one more hit
and he’s leaving ugly bruises on her hips; painting his [vicious] sins all over her skin
mister, mister; hardcore punk rock [electric] jack the ripper
...making her scream, making her shiver::..
a heroin wonderland crawling slowly through x.broken glass veins
he’s a live wire of violent glitter and kissable porcelain-
--scream.cry.spitting out his heart with a craving for pain;
of course he’ll get what he needs tonight [&&every night]
the tulle on her dress is cutting into her thighs like barbed wire
her back pressed into the mattress as she ---unzips--- the skin along his spine
&&her splintered {princess} heart beats in perfect time
..::to the pulsating fear burning in his electricity eyes;;
--:he’s mister asphyxiation with a [[delicious]] : fairytale : {heroin} kick
&&he leaves all the
[pretty girls]
gasping
for
breath;;
.:::[[he’s the perfect. fucking. Hollywood end.]]:::.
Author notes
Contest original.
Kind of a companion piece to {{xoxo}}.
Hope you like. :]]
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A contest entry
- ♥ Do You Bleed Glitter? ♥ by Dead Star--x.
450 points, ended March 22, 2007, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Holy. Whoa. Yea, I'm speechless, too. I started reading it to myself then without realizing it, I was reading it out loud in this very fast pace. And I still understood the meaning. I love this
Outstanding job!
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amazing x infinity. words fail me. i've read this over and over again.
this is stunningly beautiful.
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oh. my. god.
this DEFINES dirty pretty. i will comment more later. i must read it a few more times. LOVE.
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your work is kick ass missy.
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"fucking junkie fantasy; coin-operated boy with a .skeleton. smile
he’s deader inside than her flawless eyes going blind beneath the dirty glamour disco lights
he’s the fucking [alkaline] running through her veins and spilling down. her. plastic. thighs."
Wow this is flawless<333
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I loved this. This was amazing. I liked the whole thing. you are an amazing author, and I envy you...I really do. Great write.
later.
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Awwhh. :]]
Thank you very much.
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a heroin wonderland crawling slowly through x.broken glass veins
luved that & the ending too! thanx for entering & i like the way this was laid out in story form, good luck!
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Thank you. :]]
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tis site has been bombarded lately with these pretty dirty pieces though some are original the sporadic spacing, brackets, punctuations make them a tad hard to read. I do like some of the images you have created heree good luck in the contest
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Awwh;; thank you.
I think I used to write these
before they were all the rage [lol],
but you're right; suddenly I come back
to AP, && they're everywhere. Blehh.
But thank you for your comments, lol. :]]
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