Content I must be
to be alive
It's alive! jingles
my nerves awaken
Pain becomes my middle
name of all my weaknesses
tears withheld
anticipating
the other
shoe
A contest entry
- Who Are You... Tell me. by Lj-.
350 points, ended March 16, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"It's alive!" lol, wow this made me laugh.
I really like this. It's ridiculous- in a great way, of course.
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck!
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Glad someone appreciates my wry sense of humor:
Always in the now
Ann
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Not too much pain
I hope? 7th line with held one word though they each are words on their own.
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I went space bar happy.
Pain is what you allow it to be. This is purely stressor pain. Porphys get it from bad stress not good stress. Being busy working is good thinking about the next gen is bad.
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