Never ever wanted this...
Dissolution
Wafting winds send a chill
down deep to my core,
like a zealous zephyr.
blurring this robotic reality
so I don't know whats real anymore.
Waning whirlwinds plague
my textile thoughts until
dreams drain, painfully prancing
around my consious mind.
Couldn't hide the emptiness...
Barrenness
Staring back at the mirrored mirage
that sits before me, while
fiddling fingers crush out
my last cigarette.
The blemished beauty,
fondled by the bareness
of ashen alleys.
Carnal calamities festered
inside cerebral containment.
I must be dreaming...
Devastation
Captivated chaos surrounds me.
This wreck, disturbed by
swatting swarms of misery.
Absolute annihilation of reality,
festered by a fruitful fascination
falling prey to fickle foundations.
Loneliness induced pain.
Facing myself, alone I break.
Railroaded ramblings echoing.
Facing all that is left...
Extinction
Staring at my amethyst apparition
amidst the bellowing barricades.
My own prehistoric procreation,
spin cycles around my mind.
Luscious laughter surrounds me.
Opinionated opposition speak
of only public perception.
If, in the end I had to fall
facing my own extinction.
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It is a very strong write, but your title is spelled wrong and I caught one or two other mistakes in the actual poem. Thank you for entering this into my contest.
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Fantastic write. You worked the phrases in smoothly and created something I interpret as a philosophical dolefulness complete with dark human brooding that makes an interesting read. Nice job! 
s ~Genie~
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Captivated chaos surrounds me.
This wreck, disturbed by
swatting swarms of misery.
this was fabulous,, I loved it and the use of the word back was excelent.. well done with this...
I am here to read stuff so I am adding you to my favs list.. thanks for sharing that...
~wolf~
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dude
that's soft and sad. I luv it. Now i'm gonna be quiet every time i open my mouth to speak to day because of the sad silence in your poem. Thank you.
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hmmmmm, dang this is something sles i mean really you did a great job on this i loved it, but ma, keep it flowing
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Sounds like we have walked
the same path at one time or another
So very moving Encore!!!!
Roses to you
Teresa
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wow so full of pain and loss... you have penned this well with the wordbank that you have used... well done andi hope it is only for the contest and not how your feeling in life
cheers
Jen
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WOW
Wow! What a write!
So expressive and so...wow! Dang, brother, you've left me speechless! A most EXCELLENT write this is! Your fine poetic talents are shining brightly, my friend! Wow!
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