The moon
A ghostly image hanging
Beyond arms reach
Glowing gently
From a friends aura
Smiling at the world
Tempting tides
The moon
A phantasm
Pure
Silently goading
The lonesome man
The lonesome man
Lying gazing at what can’t be touched
The moon
Author notes
http://www.seenobjects.org/images/mediumlarge/2004-08-23-bamboo-moon.jpg
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired. by A Murderous Lament.
380 points, ended March 15, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ah the moon, it can bring so much madness to many if one stares at it for too long, a good piece of poetry
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This is so cool, and the pic is cool too. A wonderful write!!!!
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glad you like it i like the picture too
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Love it Mark.
love always
Skylar
So glad to be back! -
simplely put, this was wonderful i mean are these your thought from that pic, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Great.
I love this poem. Great imagery. Man, beautiful words.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33
Considering for finalists.
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