Simplicity
was
not
once
a
lovely
thing
to
choke
upon...
A contest entry
- Quick two--- 10 lines and 10 words by layla..
300 points, ended March 13, 2007, 14 entries
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short circuiting to ease may find it hard
poet (not needing Poet or POET?),
"Simplicity" is a refined way, I feel, of showing the idiosyncrasy even of society such that oh please would pass up the garden in the country for a grocery store in the city but sit in a bookstore and feel the ideal of a character that could almost.
It can go many directions to say embarassment over versatile clothing compared to a wardrobe by crowds competing to keep new instead of a newer use that isn't even just for fad invention but practical. Yet durability is featured in past when it was admired to a degree to do one thing at a time with additions rather than the complex everything getting recognized for trimming only to renew what might be actually right for boredom, oh the progress in stuck someway.
It also applies in the reverse, for example monotone of not too much work that tries to hide other sorts in ways,wear is afraid for some creativity first anyway maybe.
Speech too--
I am impressed, and may you not gag I don't flash applause by the unclear icon, but believe it well done and will not have you miss out on the points that that means would be encouraging to uphold the principle
~Carolyn
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