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Anything But Ordinary


Anti
Has found its conformity
And Forever
Has found a meaning
And it's anything but ordinary

Hold me for just a moment
And you'll see
This isn't just another thing
Not just another fling
It's anything but ordinary

Anything that I could ever want
But I have it right in front of me
And I want it to last
Want it so bad
So tell me
This is anything but ordinary

Please tell me what you think

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  • The Squeeze
    March 16, 2007

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    mmm a love poem perhaps? If i might say so myself, it is anything but Ordinary . A particular write filled to the brim with imagery, amazing work


  • slightlyFey
    March 11, 2007

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    like your choice of words here and the first stanza was my favorite :
    "Anti
    Has found its conformity"
    one of the best opening lines I have read in a while
    M~


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 11, 2007
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    Clever. I like how you put this together. thanks for sharing.