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Potentiality

chemical information
packed along a double helix
determining shape of your eyes
curve of your skull
skeletal structure
color of your skin
your genetic potential

twisted braided spiral road you travel
footsteps stretching out behind you
each moment of every day week year
a decision stepping forward or back
always moving even when resting
your life potential

will both add up
to something great?

A contest entry

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  • El Pescador
    March 12, 2007
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    A brilliant association here. That double helix and all that it means. It deserves to do well.


  • Hell In Harmony
    March 11, 2007

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    chemical information
    packed along a double helix
    determining shape of your eyes
    curve of your skull
    skeletal structure
    color of your skin
    your genetic potential

    I love.love. the idea here
    And where you drew your inspiration from
    that was great
    This is my favorite stanza^
    great ideas in this lovely
    thanks for entering
    Goodluck!

    <3
    Kat