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Bitter Star

Myriad
beams,
shuttling
blinding
glare
down
streets
shadowed,
washed
away.

A contest entry

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  • Blooming Poet
    March 16

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    Wow, there is so few words, but so much emotion and meaning packed into t. love it and dyour word choice is just stunning. It kinda tells a story and I love that.

  • Kiddy
    January 30

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    This is also good... Thanks for entering...
    wish you best of luck in the contest

    love
    -kiddy