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Broken angel

Humming birds singing, come to an end.
Purple haze covering, once blue skies
fluttering black feathers fall to ground

Running clear water, crimson ran instead
no sound of music or scents to uplift
flowers withered, no blooms were growing

Sight of an angel sat crying softly to herself
losing her position at heavens golden gate
she fallen in love, his veins ran black.

Evicted from heaven, live a life of hell.
sadness in her heart stopped the earth from beating
fire in her soul no longer lived on.

dance of the demon,  ran through her soul
no beauty would it allow, no music to hear
sound of nature she loved to hear

Vanishing from her heart, no longer to appear
breathe she taken stopped, as she plunged
depth of water, crying soul set to freedom

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 11, 2007
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    this was great thankyou for entering and good luck .


  • Dusty Rose
    March 11, 2007

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    This is beautiful, yet sad at the same time..It's a wonderful writ for you, and a wonderful read for me..Thanks..

    Dusty


    • Entwining Beauty
      March 11, 2007
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      thank you such a wonderful picture to inspire once muse, thank you for the read and applauses which you have left for my poem