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Bedroom Sonnet

Trudging. Oh! But the pain
Of endless fields of papers
Lined with inky scars. To be
Free of these cloth chains; to
Sloth and bury treasures!
Dark crevices crawl and squirm and slime
And latch onto my fingers like the nets of time.

Oh! Doors open avalanches falling
Into my eyes; mounds trip and fall
To awaken thick dust in my lungs.
I promise! This shall never be again;
I shall never build these filthy walls!
Paper fortresses cut and bite and bind
And fight against my freedom like the diamond mines.

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To me it's obvious... but i'd love to hear what you have to say. What is this poem about? Inspired by a life chore.

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  • Dr Satan
    March 11, 2007
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    Dark crevices crawl and squirm and slime