Fantasy Steps

Race ahead
mind idle
thinking dreams
borrowed gold,
poverty sucks.

A contest entry

Quick two--- 10 lines and 10 words by layla.. 300 points, ended March 13, 2007, 14 entries
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Desire
March 11, 2007

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Whoa-
I agree
I'm remembering that darn Capital One commercial
So what's in Your wallet

Love this one and poverty does suck..
Thank You for sharing this~
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love~ Desire~*~

penman
March 11, 2007
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Sometimes those dollars do come in handy. Thank you love.

right now

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