This
Pain
Will
Surely
Pass...
Or
So
We
Are
Told
A contest entry
- Quick two--- 10 lines and 10 words by layla..
300 points, ended March 13, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WELL I'M NOT SURE THE PAIN PASSES BUT I DO KNOW IT FADES WITH TIME! GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST MY DEAR FRIEND I REALLY AM ENJOYING READING YOUR WORK TONIGHT
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Yeah
and this shall pass.. perfect lines to a perfect solution...
Yvonne -
Nicely done
Great work here. Very thought-provoking. Short though it may be, it's definitely got an edge to it, like at first it's confident that the pain will soon be over but then it's like, "Or will it?"
Best of luck in the contest.
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strong with your words anit you!?!?
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this was such strong words with such powerful meaning well done goodluck in contest
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Ten very well chosen words to convey this powerful message,nice arrangement as well.
Well done and good luck. -
Or so we are told...
So very true, dear sister. I am told that many times a day, but the pain continues. I can not say that it will pass, but what I can say, is that eventually, if you let it, it wil become manageable. To where it no longers decide your actions or inactions for you. I know, I have my own pain as well. I love the shape you wrote it in. Like an arrow straight into the heart. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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short but perfect, a powerful poem
good luck in the contest
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