::Kiss Me::
[In DEAD moonlight]
And 'kill' the {beast} inside
MY intentions
of being A |Plastic| Dream
/Foreshadow/ my weakness
Colored \\\poison\\\ in the night
!thoughtless! Screaming -DEAD-END- fright
~Martini~ down&down&down
;Til; {you can't remember} your----name
^stalk^ off with some [stranger]
?You'll never be? The SAME
*He's got the worst[of the best]*
~IDEAS~in his mind
::masochistic:: shouts--
=of= everything combined
By now...The !drugs! are seeping++
Through[your mind]
Rainbows''''cover'''every thought
+until+ you open your eyes--*to fate*
Inside `this coffin` dead----
(But AWAKE)
A contest entry
- Teach Me Dirty Pretty or Pretty Dirty by SensualWhispers.
495 points, ended March 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - x |Heroin| x by Dead Star--x.
300 points, ended April 16, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can feel the pain in this poems tone. I really can, it's terrible.
Great poem though, very desprictive.
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~Martini~ down&down&down
;Til; {you can't remember} your----name
^stalk^ off with some [stranger]
?You'll never be? The SAME
fell in love.lust with this stanza hunny. its great. -
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thanks
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I see
Well then. lol this was awkward. Not that I don't find your poem good... it is.. I just don't get all of the formatting. But this is really good. Great job. Thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kassie -
wow. speechless each dirtypretty poem i read is more amazing than the last.
good awork
~[I N T I M A T E]~
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