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lazy days




Telling
stories,
as
ice
cubes
slowly
melt,
in
summer
drinks.



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  • Zenith Sabriel
    March 13, 2007

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    This is so simple and fresh, yet takes you right into the moment. A far off and "misty" slice of life write. I look forward to reading more of your work. A very well done write dear lady.