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He is Perfection

Perfection is more than an opinion
When pain from the past begins to evanesce

A person so Perfect, Astounding, Intriguing
Souls and outlooks are created through experience heard through nothing
Connection through silence never had so much meaning

The site can't be exceeded for all that he is
But eyes do more then dwell on the surface

They create a world to think and believe
Dark pools holding your gaze
Unbreakable, yet unsure

From such a capricious point of view
Beauty in the absolution
Defined by the lack of realization

Life, breath, mind, and heartbeat
All in-tune

Contrary to the claims of an addict
He's the highest high, and the best drug out there


I love this boy, with the essence of every being

He is the rain
He is my world
He is my drug
He is my rock star
He is my dreams
He is my reality
He is my disaster
He is my love
He is my life

To me, he is perfect

Author notes

This poem isn't completely metaphoric, so the general message shouldn't be that hard to understand

I love Zakk, He's the best

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Comments

  • EmeraldDaze
    June 5, 2007
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    Aww...How sweet. Thank you for entering my contest


  • L. J. Arien
    May 28, 2007
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    wow this reminds me of how I felt with my ex. Like everything. wow, kinda scary. Great


  • March 12, 2007
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    No im not perfect but i love it that to you i am

    i love you