Just
one
more
time
the
darkness
comes
to
swallow
me.
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A contest entry
- Quick two--- 10 lines and 10 words by layla..
300 points, ended March 13, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i like..short but meaningful
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I luff it..i can relate so fricken bad..nice write :
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Thanks Laken! Glad you enjoyed the read!
~Lori
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I can so relate, the darkness always comes and swallows me. Such a deep and emotional write!!
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Thanks Theresa! Sorry to hear that the darkness visits you, too.
~Lori
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Wow, believe it or not, I totally related to that.
You never cease to amaze me. Every time I read something of yours, it is in a different form or style. And it is always something I can relate to and could never pull off myself.
Granted, I've only been writing poetry for a short time now, but still.
Great ten liner, or ten words, or whatever it's called.
And good luck in the contest.
~Greg~
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Thanks for the great comment, Greg! Much appreciated! Sorry to hear that you relate to this short write, as the darkness is usually not a welcomed visitor. Thanks for reading!
~Lori
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