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the tower to the right.

i heard a voice.
calling. are you there? i'm over here.

these days these days of chaos,
oh sorry..were you misinformed?
the deer get swallowed in the openings of the geysers,
hide out. hide out.

we don't need thought control
WE DON'T NEED THOUGHT CONTROL

GET BEHIND ME!
stay where i can keep an eye on you,
the eagle, the hammers,
the breaking point,
i'll crumble to ash before you even see this,
i am swept InTo ThE sHaDoWs.

oh that one, are we? crazy. crazy. they all think you're crazy.

insanity runs amuk amuk amuk  the spelling's unclear.

we don't need it. WE DON'T NEED IT. THOUGHT CONTROL.

no need for the sane to rot your brain in the ways you can't contain that fake smile that you strain to keep on you.
like reins. they fastened the bridal in your mouth with no means to get it out, you cried.

we. are. all. something.
we. are. nothing.
you. are. someone.
You. are. no one.
you. You. YOU.

my life, your love.
your life, you're mine.

me, where are you these days?
in the head of the brained, contained, abstain from their ways.
they are not us, so we are the greatest.

we will knock down the wall.

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this came. it's comin'. it's gone. it's the saving lights of chaos

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  • captaincrazy
    March 12, 2007
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    i'm gonna be honest, this line "me, where is you these days?" annoys the hell out of me. I really don't know why...was it a typo? I'm extremely sorry for saying that. But otherwise this was ABSOLUTELY amazing!!! I loved it. YAY, YOU!


  • kjfergus
    March 11, 2007
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    w00t!

    This is just so random.. but so freaking amazing! AWESOME!


  • KrazyKazi
    March 11, 2007

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    This has got to be my most favorite write by you. It's amazing, full of character and imagry. A lot of it made me think of The Wall (especially the last part) and my most favorite part of this was this line:

    "no need for the sane to rot your brain in the ways you can't contain that fake smile that you strain to keep on you."

    Simply amazing!!!


  • Undying Resolution
    March 11, 2007
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    I love your style.