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To stay and strive

As I walk
on the road of life
I leave behind me
all my strife

All the pain
will be thrown away
all the joy
here to stay

The devil has no control
although he tries
to make me steal
to make me tell lies

It all ends up
as God planed it
falling into place
bit by bit

I now know
that if I try
i will be the one
to stay and strive

Everyone thinks
I can do it
but I never thought
I could do it

Belief in yourself
is a hard deal
when you think every night
will be your last meal

I now know
that if I try
I will be the one
to stay and strive

Success is
what you make of it
all the time
you sit there and fake it

until one day
you sit up and realize
you can't control
whats in my eyes

I now know
that if i try
I will be the one
to stay and strive

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  • Sweetangelgrace gold member
    March 11, 2007

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    This poem was really a good one. the words were used in such a flowing way it all pieced together perfectly...
    Beautiful work and an honour to read and appreciate. Well done!

    ~~GRACE~~