To have a feeling
so strong
you feel like no one cared
all along
You run and run
but you can't hide
you cut and cut
and adrenaline takes a ride
You end up
real messed up
and all the stuff
just piles up
More and more
the pile seems
to revisit
in your dreams
So you finally try
to end it all
the next thing you know
your at the fall
To die has been
your wildest dream
to wake up from this nightmare
and scream
your parents make arrangements
for your own good
the next thing you know
your covered in a hood
The food sucks
and the pain kills
your no longer the one
behind the stearing wheel
Can you do it
get out and stay out
help yourself scream
help yourself shout
You finally get out
and the feelings good
but was it all worth it
is it really all good?
A contest entry
- Take time to move me; by bonjourbunnie.
425 points, ended October 6, 2007, 28 entries
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Comments
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I enjoyed this poem. I think the feeling of desperation is something that a lot of people experience, and you've portrayed it well. Good luck in the contest!

