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Three Haikus and a Pint

A pint of Guinness
Philip Larkin by my side
The trees seem so bare

Where should I begin
To fulfill my need for words?
This one's black and white

My head is spinning
Running out of ideas
I'll skip the next round

Please tell me what you think

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  • JinSays gold member
    February 21, 2008
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  • JinSays gold member
    February 21, 2008
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  • fol91 gold member
    May 13, 2007
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    This can be read as either three separate haikus or as a complete poem