Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Aboriginal Breath

From before my aboriginal breath you have been there,
Always waiting with Love for your child,
Humility my only means of rewarding you,
My Lord God how you fill my All,

Always forever
forever always
your Love endless

Seamless

Only the world keeps me away,
Most Wondrous Father, grasp my spirit in your hand for it yearns to reach you so,
Hold on to me forever, bathe me in your Love
Teach me how to Be for you

On my knees, I wonder,
I pray for Your direction
Patiently, patiently
My heart abides, enclosed in time

Reaching out, I fall
hit a wall...
of doubt,
the world strikes me like lightening.

Internal contention never truly holds
Deep within I know you are there
Only temptation distracts my faithful Love
Slowly but surely fidelity returns

Like air I float spiritually towards you once more



*******************************

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Twins 4 me
    March 29, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Very beautiful words! God does give us the best direction. Congrats on the gold!


  • thankful4theSuNsEt
    March 23, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    i really, really liked this! especially the part about temptation grabbing us, but slowly and surely fidelity returns. it's so true! this was so beautiful!


  • Talking Toni gold member
    March 17, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    AS we Journey Along.......

    it does seem the world tries to keep us from the grace and love of our heavenly father!! But as you stated his spiritual hands grasp ahold of us with a seamless love and will never let go of what is truly his!! Good luck in our contest and than you for entering!!!~~Jacen & Toni~~


  • Blueskywonder
    March 11, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is so beautifuly expressed, full of meaningful content... a true pleasure to read. Well done apple... good luck in the contest.