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Listen

Listen to the mustn'ts
  Listen to the dont's
Listen to the shouldn'ts
The impossibles and wont's
Listen to the never have's
Then listen close to me
Anything can happen Whoochi
  Anything can be

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Whoochi is Da bomb

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  • Whoochi gold member
    March 14, 2007
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    ok....everyone knows I am a lover of short writes...and well this spoke volumes to me...hope, inspiration, and want to stick it on my forehead as a constant reminder...Love this! TY for entering and good luck!


  • Samantha Mula
    March 12, 2007

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    From bud to blossom:"listen to the donts...shouldn'ts...impossible and wonts:Anything can be!"I so enjoyed this,good luck!


  • Bedroom Eyes
    March 11, 2007

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    interesting...I like the flow and scheme of the poem. I'd be curious to know what motivated this, as it could be interperated in quite a few different ways. But then, that's the true beauty of poetry isn't it? It can mean one thing to one person, then something else to another.

    Thanks for entering, and the best of luck in this contest