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My Poor Heart

How could you do this
Rip out my still beating heart
just to see me cry

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  • ForgottenMemories
    September 10, 2007

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    Wow, this is written beautifully. There aren't many words but why have a whole heap if this many can show such emotion and imagery. Loved it! Well written!


  • legendofcj
    March 20, 2007

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    Wow, so few words can hit you hard. A ton of imagery in this.... I see the pain.. and it breaks my heart