My Favorite Thought
A Pipe Dream Perhaps
One I Keep Lit at All Times
Well Most of the Time
It gets Hazy Pretty Quick with Me
An Epiphany within a Puff of Contemplation
We People like Cookies under the Sun So High
I'm the Gingerbread man Token
Escaped as I am Fully Baked
Faster than Bubbles in Brown Water
My Mind is Unclouded unlike my Breath
I Still Stand when The Smoke Clears...Well Maybe Sit
The Glaze of Reality Can't Hurt Me
I Roll Right Up When I'm Down
My Enigmatic Thought of All Universal Answers
The Meaning of Life Itself
Build a Time Machine
Go Deep into the Past
Break a Few Laws
Wait til They find Some Rocks
Get Stoned Rinse Lather Repeat
A contest entry
- Laughter that will make you choke on your own spit! And Possibly Die. by Ishtar.
390 points, ended March 17, 2007, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Hmm...It took me a while to find some humor in this piece.
Well done.
Thank you and good luck.
†Nicole -
And wow! to think this is the last poem I read here tonight
The brown water... reminded me of sewer water. Ugly smelly image.
I think you definitely got the reference to going to prison down.
What's the green eyed splutter? Is the dude the Man? The Law?
I enjoy this, and will continue to do so as soon as I get this comment box
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Slow Down Scooter
This whole poem is one long Weed Innuendo, The Bong Water, I have no idea as to that prison reference, I look with my eyes at these green buds, I'm the Dude...Let's just say I enjoy my Dooby Snacks...
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I had to read this a couple of times to find the humour.
Really enjoyed this.
Thank you for entering and the best of luck to you.
-Reni -
And, around and around we go.. This is real life.. well expressed and extremely funny. Good write. I really enjoyed reading this. I am still smiling. Blessings. Debby
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lol its such deep humor I wonder how many will understand, but I do like the repeat offender thing as all society does, we never learn by our mistakes lol have another puff!!
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