My passion dormant
Fearing loves hurting sting
I was but a cold shell
of a woman
Now standing before you
I await your approach
trembling as you touch me
Making my body yearn
with a hunger that I have
long forgotten
Aching from the loneliness
I have encased myself in
Our lips gently touching
quickly becoming passionate
and fire filled
Our energies ascending
writhing in sexual feeding
of the flesh
Bodies melting like
molten lava
Taking me from heights
of incredible ecstasy
into an eruption of cataclysmic bliss
My inhibitions lying on the floor
with our clothes
My fears dissipating with the
sweat from our bodies
I am whole again
In a list
A contest entry
- Make It Steamy by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended March 11, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Now this is a lovely piece, giving closure to your thoughts of lust for the one you love. The hunger you feel fueled your muse to give great images. It captured my mind, and I felt you close your thought with relief from longing for passion. I loved it!
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Molten lava and cataclysmic eruptions of bliss....
Now this is expression and descriptive in the metaphorical sense...
Just the way I like to read it.... [and write..lol]
I am impressed with this write...so
*A STANDING OVATION* from me...
Jeffro -
Beautiful BEAUTIFUL! *Applauds loudly and proudly!* Wonderful desire expressed so vividly! Wow I'm deeply impressed. I love your diction. So much of it I could quote but I'll keep it simply to the part I loved the best.
"My inhibitions lying on the floor
with our clothes
My fears dissipating with the
sweat from our bodies
I am whole again"
The metaphors, the ending! SUPERB! A very brilliant and sensual write!
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Holy Momma-
What a verse You have penned...
My screen steamed up
Thank You for sharing this and now I feel a whole lot better as a woman
Congratulations on Your trophy win and Thank You for the visit too
Many blessings to You!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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oHHHHHHHHH this is awesome....made ma anticipate each line.....as if I could be saying this.....awesome job!!! Now ...get outta my head! Lol...good job, better win!
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Hot number
Well, have to take a shower after reading this one. sexy and filled with passion. nicely done.
What pleasures to share?
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Nice way to bring warmth on this cold morning. The title alone grabs your attention I like this:
My inhibitions lying on the floor
with our clothes
My fears dissipating with the
sweat from our bodies
I am whole again
Wonderful & sensual words. Best of luck to you in the contest!! -
Wow! Very sensual and very passionate! Excellent! Loved every line and I thank you for being a part of the contest! Bravo and kudos!
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Yummy, yummy, yummy! Whatever your muse has been eating for breakfast, keep it up! That's a great motto for everything involved. Keep it up! The good work, and everything. Three lethargic bunnies from all the sexual tension you released in them from hearing me read this poem aloud!!!!!
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I can see the steam rising. I love it. Nice ending, "I am whole again"
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