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The Kiss

The first time I placed eyes on you I knew I wanted to kiss you.
When thoughts of this ran through my head I realized I couldn't stand temptation.
As we gazed into each others eyes I knew at that moment I wanted to kiss you.
In that very moment I could feel that you wanted to kiss me to.
So at that very moment I leaned in but you leaned in and kissed me first.

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the poem is dealing with kiss

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  • A Murderous Lament
    March 11, 2007

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    Great.

    I like this poem. Lines are kind of long so it doesn't flow as much but it is great and I can see how you were inspired by the picture. Great Job

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33