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the water washed away the remnants of his spineless soul
no longer did that matter to anyone; without a new goal
fatuous faculties flew away, no one to cajole

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Three lines of something nightmarish. LOL

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  • Lj-
    March 10, 2007
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    I like this. I like your words, also.


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  • Lady Altheia gold member
    March 10, 2007

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    Well I woul;d say that is quite permanent and final. I like the aliteration at the emd of the poem. It is kinda short to give a full analysis.