with my hand in her crib,
her grip tightens around my finger.
if i tryed to move it away,
she cryed in pain.
she didnt want to be alone,
with her mother and her father,
she wanted me to hold her tight,
she haits them all together.
she was my baby girl,
not thier youngest daughter,
im the one that that raised that lil girl,
she thaught i was her mom.
she slept in my bed with me,
almost every night,
she wouldnt stay with them,
not without a fight.
i will kill her parents,
for taking her away,
i miss my lil one,
day after day.
Author notes
"hand in hand" i love my baby girl
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired. by A Murderous Lament.
380 points, ended March 15, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aww..this is so sad!!!
im sorry
i havent read your stuff in a while..and im glad to see it is still amazing -
thats sad..Sorry
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this is a very sad poem. I can relate to it a little bit. I loved the flow and meaning of your poem. It made it so much better. Great write and good luck in the contest! -
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Awww This is a very sad poem.Keep up the good work.
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Aww
Aww this is a sad poem.
Just need you to add the picture to your authors note so I know which picture this poem was inspired from.
Great job
A Murderous Lament <\33
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