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One Petal at a Time

I wonder along the beaten path
Trying to clear my mind
A flower lingers by itelf
Strown to isolation by wind unkind

I stoop to pick up the tender blossom
Somehow to it I feel akin
Both alone in this harsh world
Solitary in our chagrin

I decide to let my feelings go
As I pluck the petals from the stem
With each one that flys into the breeze
My sentiments begin to even out toward him

I pull the first one softly
It takes off wild and free
I see that just like the petal blowing
I will go wherever nature takes me

The second one floats gently to the ground
But it is picked up by the draft again
I then know that even when I fall
I will rise and freshly begin

The third and final petal
With me I decide to keep
For now I know that somewhere in the world
For me a heart does beat

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Well it is pretty obvious which one I choose so I hope you enjoyed it

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  • Sam-a-nantha
    March 12, 2007
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    This is great. I love the way you wrote this. You laid your feelings on the line, really put them all out there. You did a fantastic job. I love the image you present throughout this poem.


  • Broken Machine
    March 11, 2007
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    Oh wow, that was really good! Great job! Thanks for entering the contest and good luck!!!