suicide is the new alive.
breathe in the fumes.
you'll know god more than you,
actually think.
get in touch with your wild side.
feel the art of death.
rip yourself open more than you,
ever have before.
take in the ghosts,
before they take you.
suicide is the new alive,
just including sharper knives.
get in touch with your rotten side.
decay the parts of your body,
which you could never manage to live with.
this is the gift, from god.
jesus christ, please keep me dead.
jesus christ, how much of this have you actually read?
hold in the demons,
before they hold you back (again).
listen, listen...
the dripping of my end.
A contest entry
- contest!!! (no rules) by nobodys-girl.
1700 points, ended July 5, 2007, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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great!
i really loved this and the way you played death off. the way you pulled god into this poem kinda of made me chuckle...in a good way! i loved this one! my fave line is "suicde is the new alive, just including sharper knives"...can you say writing genious!?!?!?!?! lol... -
ummm can you saw freaky??? but i love it! i absolutly loved the "suicide is the new alive, just including sharper knives." not really sure why...i just did. anyway thankyou so very much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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