Eyes
Seeing
So much, but
Lips, speaking so
Little. I search for
Redemption, in all the
Wrong places. Panic rules the
World, of the clowns without faces.
My dearest friends departed, without
A word of goodbye. Another day to
Waste away, trying to reach for the sky.
I disappear, under a black sun.
And when all is said and done, the
World will move on. They do not
Need my song, to put them
To sleep at night. When
Hatred conquers
The happy
Soul, I
Am.
Author notes
Double Etheree form. It was harder than I thought it would be.
A contest entry
- 10 Lines About You (Etheree form) by Lyre-Bird-.
450 points, ended March 14, 2007, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Neat!
I hope you do not think that your friends do not care for you, because we do! -
PERFECT!!!! hooray
Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!
WOW Excellent job.... Each line from start to end runs smoothly.... A deep insight.... this is really a thought provoking write here, as I read I reflect back into my life.....
well done
A perfect Double Etheree you did well
goodluck
Tracey
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