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Day with Daddy

Today is special,
Daddy says I can go with him,
We'll ride in his truck and go around town.

He says we're going to the hardware store,
I can't wait.
He always finds the coolest tools,
And when I'm lucky I can help him when he works.

I love it in the car with Daddy,
He plays his music,
The type you sing and bop your head to.
I like it when he plays the song when he points to me.

So today was good,
Today I spent my day with Daddy.

Author notes

This was inspired when we passed a truck on the road. There was a dad and his little boy and the dad was singing to the music, getting into it as he pointed to his son.

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  • Jay-B Bruiser
    March 12, 2007

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    Such good relationship you have with your dad. It is good too have a father figuire by your side...you are fortunate. Good poem!!


  • ur worse nightmare
    March 12, 2007
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    awww how cute i love this it is so sweet i love it well done mate
    cass xx


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 10, 2007

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    Daddys Girl

    Oh I do miss my daddy he was everything tome. I use to go with him every chance I had and I loved to hear him whistle when he worked. He passed at age 48 yet I take him everywhere with me now in my heart


  • Cannonsfire
    March 10, 2007

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    Clever little snapshot of the memory and well thought out. Keep penning.


  • army2005
    March 10, 2007
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    WOW

    Yeah i remember them days and will never forget them Great job. Keep i going


  • Pollycheck
    March 10, 2007

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    This is really a sweet poem. I like the way you can take the ordinary thing that you see everyday and turn it into a work of art. Very nice.

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