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Wisdom

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The wisdom of the old ways

    came to me today.

 

To remind me there is more to life

    than life within it's self.

 

We are born into this world with

    knowledge of only need.

 

As we grow we must learn that to give,

    is more important than need.

 

Love will cover all mistakes and

    forgiveness is it's tool...

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  • JohnnyD gold member
    July 8, 2007
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    oft times, to forgive is more important than to give.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      July 9, 2007
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      JohnnyD

      yes you are so right to be able to forgive is to save ones on heart Thank you for the comment...

  • Liquid memories
    March 14, 2007

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    True words

    How true, love will cover over a multitude of sins, mistakes and errors. If we forgive others, we ourselves will be forgiven.


  • Spiritual Nature
    March 14, 2007

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    So beautifully written and wise. "Love will cover all mistakes and forgiveness is it's tool...". Well done, my friend.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      March 16, 2007
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      SPIRTUAL NATURE

      Thank you my sister im so glad the wisdom was understood and NIA'ISH for the trophy.


  • Walking shadow
    March 11, 2007

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    Great poem. To give is the greatest gift. To be able to touch someones life by giving them something they need to make it through hard times, or good times. Love is the greatest gift of all.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      March 16, 2007
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      Walking shadow

      NIA'ISH for your kind words and yes my Brother love is the greatest gift of all


  • tawk gold member
    March 11, 2007

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    Yes we all must learn to give of ourselves. What a excellent piece of wisdom. Excellent flow and content


  • freespirit51
    March 11, 2007

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    Beautiful words of wisdom MY SISTER. You have done such a great job with this masterpiece. I love the thought of forgivess as a tool in life. But that is something that needs to be learned as well.


  • Lowell Poe
    March 11, 2007

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    THESE ARE WORDS TO BE PASSED DOWN.

    THE TRUE THOUGHT OF OUR CONSTANT NEED THAT IS SO MUCH A PART OF HUMAN NATURE.TO THINK THAT WE MUST BE TAUGHT TO GIVE AND FORGIVE AND LEARN TO LOVE.BUT THIS GIFTED WRITER IS ALSO WISE, FOR IT IS ONLY FORGIVNESS THAT WILL HEAL THE WORLD.IT TRULY IS A TOOL THAT IS OFTEN PASSED OVER.THIS POEM TELLS OF THE OLD WAYS THAT SHOULD BE DUSTED OFF AND NAILED TO THE WALL.....RIGHT NEXT TO THIS POEM.

    PEACE TO YOU MY SISTER.
    YOUR BROTHER,

    TENBEARS


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      March 11, 2007
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      lowell poe//TEN BEARS

      you do me honor with your kind words my brother.NIA"ISH


  • Desire gold member
    March 11, 2007

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    Precious-

    Love this one my Friend
    Powerful message and words that Touch to the core~


    Thank You for sharing this with us!
    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      March 11, 2007
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      Desire

      Thank you so much, im so glad you liked it...I am known as the wisdom keeper so every once in awhile it just comes out..Thats like your psychologist.NIA"ISH my Sister.

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