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Deadly beauty

I met a boy, a special boy
One who didn't use my heart as a toy
His hair was curly, his eyes were blue
His muscles made me feel safe whenever he was in view
He said he cared, he said he'll be there
What he whispered my ear, made my problems disappear
He said I love you to my face
I felt as if I died and went to a special place
He said he would never hurt me, he said it to my eyes
But one day he turned away my trust and told me a bunch of lies
He used me for his childish games
I never felt so much shame
He slept with a slut and said he was sorry
He told it's ok, he told me not to worry
Is that suppose it make it allright?
How do you expect me to sleep at night?
How do you just forget about it
How did you not expect me to say I quit
I thought you loved me, I thought you cared
But you challenged it, you challenged the love we shared
Well hope your happy for everything you have done

I just wanted to say that you have won

I'll read that paper you had given me, it was only a guide

A guide of how to commit a harmless suicide

I follow what it said and I"ll do it all for you

I'll end my life that way you want, all because you wanted me to

I'll leave you a letter saying I hate you for what you did

You took away my soul, you stopped me from being a kid

Hope this haunts you in our sleep

Hope you know I cut my wrist deep

I can't see anymore, hope your happy cutie

I guess they were right, you were a deadly beauty

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  • Ravenic Seraphim
    April 22, 2007

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    Wow Thank you for entering it... It's a Great Poem... So full of emtion, and yes Very Spiteful!!, I like it... and Good luck in the contest....


  • XxBROKEN-ANGELxX
    March 31, 2007
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    that was absoultly amaze wow!!! soooo spiteful!!!!


  • Catauthor
    March 17, 2007

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    Great job on this--I love the feeling that you put into a poem that could have been just vengeful or spiteful. Thank you for the excellent entry in my contest!

  • wishing
    March 11, 2007

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    Wow. this is really good, I love the last line "I guess they were right, you were a deadly beauty". Nice Write