Across the cold vastness of space, from eons of time gone by
to dance upon a face of beauty, and glimmer within a pleasing eye
The last light of the very first star
A contest entry
- Three AMAZING lines by Lj-.
340 points, ended March 11, 2007, 32 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations on winning the silver, my Friend...It seems you've had a productive day, Poet...I'm glad for you; it's lovely...
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Thank you Wanda
that reminds me i need to send a thank you... i really enjoyed the piece you sent today... the hearth...PK
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We cannot imagine the number of years it takes for one of these stars to burn out - at least for that to reach us. Makes one think a bit about the vastsness of our universe and beyond,
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thank you Granny
yes, i have read that light travels sometimes billions of years to reach us..nature amazes..PK
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This is really good.
Thank you for entering,
Good luck!
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Ahhh..."The Love Song of J. Alfred Hawking"...
Lovely penning, you astronomical Poet, you...Well done, my Friend...Good luck in the contest... Wanda
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The last light of very first star...this is such a romantic line to describe someone with, the glint within her eyes. Just beautiful as you do Love,C
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Hello Chez, Thank you
i'm getting a quick lesson in ikkyu
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