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Rubbish

So somethings new
I see it now
it's vivid and it's clean
you love this girl
it's plain to see
I can't compete with that
so take me to
the place we met
and kiss me on the cheek
let me know our days are done
remind me it was fun
laugh with me
to hide the pain
to drain the brain
of loss,
brush me off
and push me away
like rubbish
foul; lost

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  • Laken
    March 11, 2007
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    awww..how sad..


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 10, 2007

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    to be someone trash sucks, i know the feeling in this poem cause i ahve felt it before, just not the same as you, keep it flowing