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Coming Clean

It's time to come clean
To leave the past behind
To get off this perch
You have put me on
Leave this place
Where nobody sees me
Behind.

Author notes

Written way back on Nov. 17 of 2003 back when I was bored in one of my writing class in Jr year.

I have been looking back on alot of things I wrote way back in the day. Not just my old poems, but like blog entries and such. It's weird. I feel like a different person than the girl who wrote those entries, those poems. It's like that girl died and here I am in her place....

Anyways, this poem was written after one of my many fights with my middle sister that occurred in my Jr year. It is pretty much in its original form. I just felt like I wanted to post something and my evil muse has left me with nothing but depressing crap to think about.

I don't care much about if people like it. Just be honest... I could use honesty.

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  • FlirtingWithSuicide
    June 27, 2007
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    short but right to the point, a good poem indeed keep it up!

  • forwardfalling
    June 19, 2007
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    great write

    I like this write a lot. very nice penning.
    I can tell you have talent deep in your coat pockets.

  • Jessica Lyndsay
    June 1, 2007

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    wow you have a lot of talent you should get some of your poems published i am my mom is a publisher so some of mine are but they are not as good as your

  • forever dreaming
    April 15, 2007

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    This is short but straight to the point. To often I life we live with the chains wrapped around us by someone who wanted to drain the life from us, take away our freedom and spirits. What you have said should be a message to all those trapped in a situation they feel they can not escape from. The past is merely that, the past, something we can't go back and change. It's time we all got out there and started living for life is too precious and short. Well penned and just proves you don't have to write an epic to create a work of art with a powerful message.
  • DreamingSpirit
    March 16, 2007

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    Honesty, huh.......................

    Well, honestly... I like it... its short and doesn't beat around the bush. Like a certain cheese dish I know... wait ... did I say that? ;-)
    DS


  • tina12345
    March 16, 2007

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    good poem my dear poet so how are you doing today? if you wanna take a look at my poems look for tina12345 hope to hear from you soon.
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