Love blossoms so intoxicatingly
in those deep gazes at passion's precious petals,
growing in our eyes, with lips grafted together
pruning my every sensation to an agonized ecstasy
using your rose fingertips of ravenous red,
to erupt tiny volcanoes of sensual lava
each time your silky touch
seeds my aching pores
till they become grasping twines
rooted in my heart.
I can only see the bouquet of your exquisite beauty,
when it thrives to make our stems of desire entwine
and we bud as a single pulse of flowering affection,
fragrance with the scent of infatuation,
planting our souls with obsession's clinging vines.
Together, rising in a firework vase
of purest caring embrace,
we inhale the secret roses of each other's garden
till it lingers forever,
in adoration's sweetest
aroma.
Author notes
For the one rose who could blossom love more beautifully than any other, my AP wife, Desire.
A contest entry
- Love and Roses. by Poetic Aphrodite.
400 points, ended March 11, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopelessy Romantic Guys by Ice queen 17.
300 points, ended April 5, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Magic to the heart by AngelKissez059.
300 points, ended March 20, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me love :) by Regenhart.
600 points, ended March 23, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like the flower-theme
Thank you for entering
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very touching and love set. loved the expression. GReat job keep it up
thansk for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for the wonderful words.
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oh
my
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damn, that was so touching, VERY sensual, and very captivating indeed. i just love the diction and the way you have compared the essentials of a flower with that of your love. and also how each line has a reference to both love and roses. metaphorically intwined. VIVID images. very positive, very devoted... it really suits the contest you've entered "hopelessly romantic"! good luck! and congrats too for the previous win.
you make me appreciate the aroma, the colours, and the soft, fragile petals of flowers of all kinds even more.
a very unique and beautiful take.
plus, that's very sweet of you to dedicate this to your AP wife.
thanks so much for sharing! you're an awesome poet!
bless ya!!
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Wow. You are so touching with the comment. Thank you so much. And it isn't hard to be romantic when you have someone like my AP wife to inspire.
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Oh my..I adore roses !! what a beautiful piece you have created ..
Best of luck...
Thank you for sharing..
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And thank you for such a great comment.
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Wow, explosive how you metaphorically used the rose as a symbol of your growing loving relationship...well penned here my friend! The imagery was sweet and lingers in my mind even after I have stopped reading..Awesome job! Good luck!
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Awww. You so kind. So glad it touched. Kind of pointless to have a love poem if it doesn't. Thank you so much for reading.
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Wow
hey you are really good I enjoyed this piece a lot. Thankyou for entering and good luck
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Thank you. I glad you enjoy this one. Just felt it deserved to be used again and thanks for giving me a place to share.
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Beautiful
A well worded and written poem. The imagery was fabulous. Well deserving of the accolades.
~*Starr*~ xxxx
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
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I popped in to see who stole my poetry trophy, but what I saw was so amazing I felt ashamed by entering my prosa, you've got it this I must say, your poetry the aroma of the day.
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Awww thank you for the great comment. Got to blame my AP wife for this one.
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Precious-Precious-
This is a Gorgeous Masterpiece You have shared with my Heart
Thank You for allowing me the Honor of inhaling Your scent and Love from within
-sigh-
You know how to Touch this Spirit and I am so Blessed!!
What images You show me and I feel like I am right beside You on this Journey!!
Wow~
Kodak moment Sweetness
Thank You for making my Day bright and for being the most radiant Light!!
You are a Dream come true
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thankyou for your beautiful and breathtaking entry, Bella
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Thank you so much.
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This is really beautiful. Nice work!
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Thank you. I'm such a sucker for these contest. Waiting for my AP wife to read it.
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