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Today

Today,
a new day, stepped
out a door seeking new
brightness.  One door, one day opened
to light.

~~~

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Just something that happened today, though I got lost and the light still isn't bright enough, but need to believe that steps taken are worthwhile efforts...

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  • garde a l eau
    November 25, 2007
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    ~ Karen


  • Yemassee gold member
    March 11, 2007

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    They are worthwhile Mi, we both know that...even though it is hard and seems like too much. Someone we once both knew told me to take baby-steps and she was right...one small step at a time adds up after a while. I can't say I've often followed that advice but it is good none-the-less.

    I know that is easy to say when inaction is what we're used to...

    Like a lot of your poems there is hope...but also that little edge that speaks something a little less than hope.


  • MargaretG
    March 11, 2007

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    Each day we have an opportunity to start again, a new day. Your personification is terrific miMi, this is a perfect expression of hope. Best wishes to you!


  • gaze
    March 10, 2007

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    Step by step is how we get where we need to be
    There are times when the light shines too bright, blinding us to a point that we lose direction.
    Small rays of light might be better than an incandescent light. all you (us) need is to get at a start point, then we get confidence to walk further. I'm sure you will sooner than you think
    Sending you lots of love and hugs always