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Togeather Forever

I went to see my baby
After are biggest fight
I was hoping maybe
I could make things right

So when I got there he was waiting
downstairs by the phone
I asked him if we were still dating
he replied with a little moan

He said of course baby I loved you along
As we sat on the couch I looked into his eyes
I felt a feeling so strong
it made me wanna cry

As he leaned over to kiss me
so gently and so soft
I told him I was sorry and that we'd always be
he told me that he loved me and that he needed me

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  • Just-Meghan
    March 10, 2007
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    Sweet, luck would be to have a guy like that


  • Kevan
    March 10, 2007

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    Sweet poem, Amee. Great rhymes... they are so natural and put in place so carefully. It seemw you've been storing this inside for a while. Great peice and good luck in the future!