There he sits reviewing his ways
looking for that smidgeon of praise...
Knowing in his heart throughout the passing days
although he’s born of art, he’s been reduced to a mere gaze
So now he starts to part, to rectify his ways…
Knowing in his heart,
it will take days and days and days...
But before he can begin,
he must believe from within ...
And start those coming days,
with a smidgeon of praise...
Please tell me what you think
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Hello.
Interesting write. Speaks of ego to me, how it lacks inherent self belief, and value so it needs to get it from some where else, and that somewhere else is not within. And you are very right, belief must come from within. Your use of the word "rectify" adds an interesting slant, as in it could be "adjust" or "improve, make right", so to just adjust for the claps of strangers.......... Can't say much more as I have written some stuff about this, for one of my writes, hahaha.
My regards.
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ah we all seek it ... God bless this is lovely.
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So true
I think at time most do seek praise if not for anything but self assuranc e. Perhaps my biggest fault as i try to write poetry is that, if i do not get the occassional, EXCELLENT, I start to doubt myself. But this is a fine write that makes me aware of being just human. And ty so much for your kind comment
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Excellent! And so true.
Good rhyme, rhythm and meter.
I like this a lot.
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this is simply lovely! and yes we all need just a little praise now and then
so here you are...
GBY
SilverButterfly
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I always like to return the favor on a comment I am given and I am glad I did this is a beautiful write, well worthy of more than a smidgeon of praise.
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I love the flow and think this is truly an amazing job. Keep penning those beautiful poems.
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This does flow well. We all want it, but often we don't give it ourselves, especially to the One who most deserves it. I've heard it refered to as an "attitude of gratitude".
Great write!
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This is a real gem. It flows so smoothly, you're actually taken away on the feelings/emotions of this person. The idea of carrying on, even with something so small 'a smidgeon of praise'
- inspiring and heartfelt words. Great Write
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i really like the flow of this. the rhyme just rolls off my tongue. very well written.
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Beautiful!!!
It's such a simple act that needs to be done more regularly nowadays....
Nice piece!!!
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We all have that need.................
to be praised. It kind of gives a boost to the old ego at times. aAnd at other times it just simply brightens our day. But to do something without expecting praise would be such a reflection of character!!!!You did a wonderful job on this!!!!Thanks for sharing!!!!~~Toni~~
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Is this about someone looking for the heart and fortitude to mend his ways...looking for that "smidgeon of praise", if only from himself to himself! LOL
Cute poem...interesting actually. I had to think about it, but it had a lot to say really...
Here's my "smidgeon of praise" for you...I think you have talent, and I want to see some more poems from you!
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nicely done
Stimulating, for only one can make the needed change and receive that praise. Nice flow here and thoughtful.
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well done
I like the theme and the rhyme...Simple and sweet..I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Mat -
Sometimes all it takes is a "smidgeon of praise" to give someone the courage to continue on or to venture into a new field. Whether it's sincere or not-it can produce good fruit-get the ball rolling, at least.
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Isn’t it funny how we are all fueled by praise? Even if it’s insincere, we seem to crave the praise of others – until we realize how cheap it really is. I have my few people who I admire, and those from whom I would take counsel, and praise from those is well received and fondly treasured. HOWEVER, there are some whose praises are empty and pathetic – sometimes being used just to get something they want from you.
So, what am I saying? You may want a “smidgeon” (love that word btw) of praise, but you better be selective of who you’ll accept such praises! It’s the difference between a grain of salt and a string of pearls!
Thanks for sharing your work!
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Inspiring
All days start with us lookin in the mirror and praising ourselves. Some people actually talk to their reflection others just gaze upon it and try to make it look better. All forms of praising ourselves. Thank you for the great write.
Always pen from the heart and you shall never write wrong.
~SongByrd
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This poem really gets the creative juices flowing. What a great job with the way this was written. Thank you for sharing this Smidgeon lol of praise.
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And you are right, the starts the fire from where you must see his glory. I love this write, which makes me know, you know yourself and love those close to you. What a lovely thought, for 2 people to come together as one, creating the perfect bond
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Don't you just love the word 'smidgeon'? Rhymes with pigeon ... I digress ... this is an interesting poem. I may be completely off my tree with this but I am imagining a spot of Writer's block (or something along those lines) and he/she is consoling himself/herself with the notion that a "smidgeon of praise" would really help to get things back on track. So here you have it, matey, a smidgeon of praise (and more) ... this is a very thought provoking poem.
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I feel you are speaking of an artist....an artist stuck with his gift...not knowing quiet where to start again...it will come..it always does...nicely done, thanks for sharing
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good title
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