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The 'Vexation' Thinker

Brush strokes
kaleidoscope of
colors

Snaking their way
helter-skelter
in my conscience

---a palette
overrun
by tormenting

---apocalyptic
mayhem
that sneaks

---darkness grows
and lingers
as brights fade

---my thougths turn
to vexation
scaring me


I don't want
to die;
but,
I don't want
to live-
thinking
of dying,
either.

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  • Cinnarry gold member
    March 14, 2007

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    I don't want
    to live-
    thinking
    of dying,
    either.

    wow Bets! This is the awesomestestesterest!!!