Boy I'm depressed
I don't fit into the dress
Atkins doesn't work,
And Slimfast is a fucking jerk
It's driving me insane,
of how they're all the same
The pressure put on by those fucking dicks
to be the clone of a motherfucking stick
Ok, so you may of guessed, I'm rather large
Large? I'm the size of a fucking barge!
And you know what? I couldn't give a shit!
Cos no matter what they say, I am beautiful
Even if the dress won't fit
Please tell me what you think :)
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I'm really in love with this poem, its how a feel all the time. So I felt a real emotional connection with it..
Please keeping telling the truth.
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I really like how you just took your anger and annoyance at the situation and just went with it, but please forgive me for saying that I think you could have phrased it a little better, i.e. without as much swearing. Please don't think that I mean that you shouldn't be angry; all I mean to say is that an excess of swearing will take away from the true meaning behind your poem. Welcome to allpoetry.com, and, again, nice poem. ^-^
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no one needs to conform and become the anorexic bitches you see on tv anymore! you stick it to them!
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