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Gazing outside

Gazing outside, many things await
A vision of many thoughts and dreams
Zoning in and trying to focus on each one
Its the beauty of spring that you're seeing
Now its time to open up that window of opportunity
Glimpses of beauty, comes to life before your eyes

Over and over again, let the magic take you
Understanding just what the vision partakes
This is special, a once in a lifetime chance
Something, if left unattended, will never return
Inside your thoughts, then the beauty of it all shows
Drawing inspiration, its time for you to react
Especially gazing outside, the promise of life is there

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  • S2ndQueen
    March 17, 2007
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    huzzah?


  • Desire gold member
    March 12, 2007
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    Beautiful-

    What images You have shared my Friend and the Beauty of Life~
    that one can gaze outside through the window!

    Thank You for sharing this with us
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Scarzat
    March 10, 2007

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    Hi!

    The beautiful lines:

    Drawing inspiration, its time for you to react
    Especially gazing outside, the promise of life is there.

    Good job!

    Take care!

    Scarzat