Up all day
up all night
stitting in the kitchen
till morning strikes
jumping for joy
yelling at the top of their lungs
i swear the world can hear them
yelling for yatzee'x
five dice, one roll
all is quiet
but all is load
all is right
but all is wrong
happy fills thier lives
to be together
one brother, one sister
like kids playing in the street
on my side of the game
school is over
basketball goes in
dishes get stacked
time to go home
boy thats wacked
homework gets done
clothes get washed
then i go to bed
for it to strat all over
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Really good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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Good write. good luck in the contest.!
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this was good.
i enjoyed reading this. awesome job here! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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yikes sounds pretty crazy - nice descriptions
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hmmz, wonderful work
you are really nice while writing this one
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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Nice work, not as dark yet busy. Shows the everyday wind and grind.
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cute (:
thanks
-dh -
hey this a good poem. its very easy to picture in my head. nice work big sis
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Nice Write Babygirl!
Really has an upbeat, rauckus sense to it. It has kind of a hectic and chaotic meaning, I mean my head is spinning just from reading the blasted thing. All in all a really good write and very good to hear some positive insight from the one I love. Keep up the positive attitude cause we'll have plenty of times together where happiness is all we can focus on. Stay strong and if we stick through the rough times together we will have a lot of great times together. I LOVE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING SO PLEASE LET'S FIGHT THROUGH THE DARKNESS TOGETHER.
LOVE YOUR HUSBAND
Phaseia
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Wow! I am exhausted after that. Very good light hearted poem, I could just picture it in my mind!
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