You were always so far…
I sighed, you swung from stars
And I waited below, you did not care
For the danger, while I called out “Beware!”
And when you plummeted, “I told you so”
But I tell you that then I did not know
How this would all end, no crystal ball
Could have forewarned me that one day you’d fall
From even greater heights, don’t rub it in,
Yes I was always your limp mannequin.
You moulded me into the shape required,
As if by divine provenance inspired…
So now, well, you are limp, as I was then
(How malleable the fortunes of men)
I know that you wanted stars to surround
You instead of stasis underground
But you’ve had too much adventure, I think.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Again brillant use of words.
But you’ve had too much adventure, I think.-you should never think...HAHA

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you know you really are a rhyme master but when i read you i see a wisdom far beyond your years.the depth in your words takes me to new heights.your talent as a writer will acheive many accolades for you in your lifetime.


