I sit in class
And wonder why one guy's an *bunny*
He picks on one kid each hour
I don't know how that kid can take it
Bad names are thrown at his face
He breaks under all the strain
He can't handle the pain
But just about a day ago
I couldn't take it much longer
So said what was on my mind
And tried to stick up for the guy
Those general meanies said "It's fun"
That ticked me off even more
Aswell as the fact one of those jerk used to be
A good friend to me
Even though I don't like the kid
Who's picked on everyday
I'll try to make sure he not the victim anymore
I'll stick up for him if he needs it
I just hope
That doesn't crack to much
And i also hope
That those boys will stop being jerks
And leave the kid alone
Author notes
I am a rule follower
A contest entry
- Profound Rounds (Series Contest) by Kevan.
345 points, ended March 10, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow this is a great poem!it has alot of discrition in it.i especailly like the first part.this poem would win a contest!good job!
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I liked this. People can just be so rude and violent. Sometimes it's because of looks and peer pressure that makes you want people to see you as "cool". Bullying is no fun and to stand up for what is right is above and beyond being a good person. Well done.
~Pixie~
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Hey, sweet work.
I enjoyed this. The only thing was the rhyme scheme wasn't definite, but your strong message allowed me to overlook that. Great work and good luck in the contest
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