secretly in love with you
oh you
the one being chased by all those
I feel like am in a race
in your heart do I've a place
oh babe
which you think of me as I do
could this dream come true
closing my eyes
and secretly loving you
shame on me
can't scream it out
and if I do
would you ever know?
would you come for me
can you see what no one can?
well I'll keep it to myself
till my secret reviels itself
and I'll be hoping my pain'll end
Yassmin Elnazer
Author notes
option 2
A contest entry
- For Trophies That Shine Group Only by Angel With No Halo.
700 points, ended March 17, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very emotional. There are a lot of misspelled words in here though. You may want to check that out. Overall.. great write. I could feel the sorrow in every line. Thanks for the entry
~Krys~
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