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Piece by Piece

Recreate me from stone- your greatest sculpture
Immaculate and smiling
looking towards the road that we have to travel

Make my heart beat

I am dying
watching, watching, watching

How can we
How can we
how can we raise innocence in a world of stone
No greatest sculptures or works of art
No beating hearts

Only wanderlust
a combination of no-where-to-go
and can't stay here

Recreate me
listen to my heart as it slows,
needing something new to speed it up

Bringing to life a new creation
our greatest work yet
Artists lost with one masterpiece
one not of stone, but Flesh and Bone

How can we
How can we
How can we make her happy
piece by piece
moment by moment

In a world of stone statues but no works of art
In a world of beatless hearts, Beatless music

lost
lost
lost

Wanderlust in the direction that leads to nowhere but somewhere else

Guide her in the right direction
Our masterpiece
our beautiful one

Author notes

This is dedicated to my baby girl, my greatest creation in a world of nothing.

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  • Roseleaf
    August 22, 2007

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    delightfully dome

    The beauty of how your boyfriend makes you feel here is very beautiful done there is much love here and all the very best to you both and your little one

    Love Pauline


  • DawnBaby
    May 3, 2007

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    Congratulations!

    I very much enjoyed this piece of work! Sort of a concrete abstract style to it, I very much like it! I will have to read some more of your work, you are a fellow Minnesotan! I also enjoyed your page.


  • Ohlympia
    March 11, 2007

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    This is beautiful. The phrase "recreate me" simply packs so much power and meaning it. Your repitition and descriptions were wonderfully used, too. Amazing ♥♥