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Pain Surpresses Inside




Drenched in blood that recites torture

      Memories that compress in brains

Scarred for life without a savour to capture




Author notes

No heros to capture from my sublininal sorrow and downfall self.

A contest entry

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  • Lj-
    March 10, 2007
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    I lie this. Very powerful.


    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck!


    • Calamity Soul
      March 10, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment.

      Most of my poetry comes from my heart.

      Good luck into judging the contest.